MORE THAN ACTIONS...

MORE THAN ACTIONS...

A Poem by Alexandra G.

More than actions,
We were the perfect match.
No longer the time,
Your smile was a bright blessing.

More than actions,
I gave you a chance.
You never care nevertheless,
I was your only hope.

More than actions,
You were cutting my wings.
You were toxic,
I was lost.

More than actions,
We knew we couldn't be together.
It was a big mess,
But our love was there no matter what.

More than actions,
I need you here... with me.
My pain and my joy,
I miss you more and more every single day.  

© 2019 Alexandra G.


Author's Note

Alexandra G.
Ignore grammar problems, dialogue or word orders...

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The throws of a somewhat difficult relationship shine here. It’s almost a yin and yang situation. The truth behind this though is that on one note you can’t live in a negative one sided world but the second part to it is....love takes over our deepest thoughts and emotions.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alexandra G.

1 Year Ago

Exactly! Our emotions are beyond strong... thanks so much for your kind review!



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When someone excite our mind and heart. We need them close. I liked the honest tone in the words. Thank you Alexandra for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alexandra G.

1 Year Ago

Thanks so much for your review and your thoughtful words...
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome Alexandra.
Such a common dilemma in relationships. We can’t live happily with their presence or their absence. It’s two extreme seasons we can’t seem to endure. Well said here.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alexandra G.

1 Year Ago

Indeed! Thanks so much for your review... Blessings!
The throws of a somewhat difficult relationship shine here. It’s almost a yin and yang situation. The truth behind this though is that on one note you can’t live in a negative one sided world but the second part to it is....love takes over our deepest thoughts and emotions.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alexandra G.

1 Year Ago

Exactly! Our emotions are beyond strong... thanks so much for your kind review!
Actions speak louder than words. More than actions requires a lot of sacrifice. I feel the bitter truth in this relationship. Wonderful layout of thoughts...

Posted 1 Year Ago


Alexandra G.

1 Year Ago

Thank you Sami, always learning from the biggest ones yet...
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

You are welcome to

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Alexandra G.
Alexandra G.

San Juan, Puerto Rico



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