the swan girl !

the swan girl

by: mackenzie

there once was a girl ,

a swan girl

she livd long ago,

in a tower ,

so talll ,

she never met a person ,

in her lonely tower ,

just a room ,

full of noisey silence !

and a mirror ,

a broken mirror,

reflecting ,

her sad eye's

her sad eye's ,

tears flowin down

her face

feather's for hair

adn wing's so wite

one day

she was cryin alon

she realizd,

she didnt have no freind's 

bcuz they was scard,

of her wing's and feathr's ,

she took a nife ,

and cut of her wing's !!

blood evrywhere,

she cried more ,

and died,

alone

alone in her tower,

the end

Author's Note

this is a poem i wrote , i spent along time on it, tried 2 use short lines and magic , pleeease review i really want reveiws thank u bless u !!