Deception

A Poem by M.K. Jawdat

not sure what i just wrote

Atrocious beauty
Claiming it all
Vanity patched in poise
Sharp heels treading on weak strings of hearts
Polka dots and pucci, patterns, colours loud and soft
Composed on the paper of minds with
Harshly rendered lust
In sketch of love.

© 2014 M.K. Jawdat

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Tinkerbellje

I'm left thinking of the fake women you see in magazines. The Z list celebrities that are famous for being famous and who have the most expensive fashionable clothes and accessories. Nice read :-)

Posted 10 Years Ago

Zahra

Vanity patched in poise, great line

Posted 10 Years Ago

Zahra

Intersting, speaks of seduction and deception in relation i guess. Makes me think of the fashion industry the way you used those elements. Nice

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

Thanks . . . . . . . . . . . .

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Added on March 27, 2014
Last Updated on March 27, 2014

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M.K. Jawdat

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Not much to say about me. 1. I like to write for fun, practice and clearing my mind. I write with the pen name that is my wc name as well. 2. I appreciate reviews and critique. 3. I dislike rude.. more..