Away

Why must it always be

that leaves must fall from their trees

They start out small but grow fast

but soon they fall for leaves dont last

 

The sun shall rise everyday

but then is seems to go away

shines hight and bright all throughout noon

then hides behind hills much to soon

 

Birds appear all summer long

chirrping and calling cheerful birdy songs

but then the cold air warns them of snow

alerting them that it is now time to go

 

 

Author's Note

i still think theres something missing to it, if any of you have ideas, i'm all ears

Reviews

[Alexis]

I can honestly say that I love your poetry, Kelly haha. It takes me quite some time to think of words that rhyme and make sense but you make it look so easy!

[kelly]

thanx cloud, and i always appreciate it when people comment even when there not very positive

[Anonymous]

Ohoho, very nice poem indeed. Exquisitely worded.