Blood in my mouth

Blood in my mouth

A Poem by Marrissa cardello
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A poem.

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I feel you no matter where I am
for you kissed me in every beautiful place
now your memory comes flooding back
It never goes away
I taste you like blood in my mouth
like a burn on my skin, like a needle through my finger
you infuse yourself into me
you sucked the beauty out of my life with your lips
like a vampire sucks blood
You kissed me in every beautiful place
now I taste you like blood in my mouth.

© 2022 Marrissa cardello


Author's Note

Marrissa cardello
This isn't usually what I write so I apologize in advance for the low caliber.

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Another day another slay.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is quite good. sharp and emotive ... )

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

different style of expressions with little horrible touch.
amazed love also leave this sort of feeling.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I truly enjoy this piece. For a start at poetry I think it is fantastic. You are a talented writer for sure Marrissa.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marrissa cardello

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for your review! This review really made my day.

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Added on December 21, 2022
Last Updated on December 21, 2022
Tags: love, heartbreak, depression, pain, sadness, romance

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Marrissa cardello
Marrissa cardello

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