Forgive me ...

Forgive me ...

A Poem by the_stoic
"

calling out to she who's my life

"

Forgive me
for your hate isn't something I can take
My feelings for you were never fake.

Forgive me
for I pine for you
Without you my beats will be painful, whatsoever few.

Forgive me
for I long to be fed by your tender hands
The nimble fingers that weave magic akin to a wand.

Forgive me
for without you I am all alone
Herein lies a void, only if it could be shown.

Forgive me
for 'I love you' ain't just a line
It’s a compendium of my emotions, left unbound by time.

Forgive me
for without you my nights are blue
Staring at the crescent moon, all i can ever think of is you.

Forgive me
for redemption is all i seek
I will henceforth be cautious, even turn meek.

Forgive me
for I want to hold you once again
Just to reinstate the belief that I am still sane.

   Forgive me
for I want to see the sweet smile on your face

The gleam that drives away melancholy without a trace.


Forgive me
for all my dreams are cast around you
Once shattered, they won't be build anew.

Forgive me
for I have lost possession of my heart
It's yours now, even death won't do it part.

Forgive me
for i crave to wipe away your tears
Transcend with you to a utopian world where there ain't no fear.

Forgive me
for at times i went overboard
And behaved as a lout belonging to the horde.

Forgive me
for "You know me inside out" is all i can say
To regain your trust my lady, any price i am ready to pay.

Forgive me
for with you inside, i was never alone
I brazenly faced the world to which i now fall prone.

Forgive me
for my soul is already taken
Watching you walk away, my inner core is shaken.

Forgive me
for nyctalgia is slowly beginning to grow
Rendering me weak at the knees, forcing me to kowtow.

Forgive me
for its hard to deal with the pain of losing you everywhere i go
I can no longer put on a show.

Forgive me
for all i beg for is one last try
The last chance before you turn away and say goodbye.

Forgive me
for however naive this may sound
You are the only ethereal beauty this mortal has ever found.

Forgive me

for till my last breath i'll keep praying to the Heavens above

awaiting to hear from my angel , the three magical words of Love.

Forgive me
for i can't stop loving you
It's something that i will always do.

Forgive me...

© 2010 the_stoic


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the_stoic
honest reviews are most welcome .. i have poured my heart out to shell out these words ..

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the literal wording flowed smoothly
the emotions felt like they were genuinely expressed
sometimes i wondered if you were asking forgiveness from a lover and other times i was wondering if the forgiveness you really seek is from self for giving so much to another that does not give back...
you inspired a lot of emotion and that in itself makes a great write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


6 of 6 people found this review constructive.




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I must admit that your poem resonates with the song 'Please forgive me, I can't stop loving you'.

Posted 3 Years Ago


its very beautiful, touching... and depicts the exact emotions of a particular phase :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I loved these lines 'Forgive me, for 'I love you' ain't just a line, It’s a compendium of my emotions, left unbound by time' Really really beautiful, your words are so passionate and makes me almost want to cry. Those lines stood out the most for me.


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the_stoic

7 Years Ago

thank for your words sir and i am glad that my write connected to you :)
A touching poem... The depth of these words enthrall me. I read love poems all the time on this site,,, but the way you profess your love from different dimensions, from every nook-n -corner reveals the power of the emotions that gripped you while wrote this. So even if this one is a long piece, its never a tedious one; rather quite an enjoyable one.. Loved it :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pratik

7 Years Ago

It sure is... I'm looking forward to read more from you :)
the_stoic

7 Years Ago

there are a lot many on my profile .. find your time :)
Pratik

7 Years Ago

I will sure do :)
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Mia
This is brilliant, so much emotion. It's crazy! Wow! I'm at a loss of words...I don't know how to tell you how amazing this was!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the_stoic

7 Years Ago

yes and it stands as my favourite too ..
There is so much here and each stanza is rich with depth. Beautiful write. The root for word "Passion" is, to suffer. It makes sense as we ache for another, whether near or far.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the_stoic

7 Years Ago

so very true ~
You poured your heart out beautifully and so raw are your emotions... you've shared your deepest pain in a way that we all can relate.. I'm thankful for your honesty of emotion and so thankful you shared this with all of us.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the_stoic

7 Years Ago

thanks for stopping by dear . and yeah it's the most heartfelt write of mine ~
Smooth. Touching.
Love this line- "Rendering me weak at the knees, forcing me to kowtow"

I have never used the word kowtow, and had to actually refer to dictionary (yes, I aint that good at vocabulary). So I read a great poem and got my new word for today!

thanks!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the_stoic

7 Years Ago

ah! this is my all time favourite !
Oh my
This filled my eyes and I so didn't want to cry today haaa !
It's so powerfully beautiful full of pain and love. I would most definitely think you would be forgiven but Love has a mind of its own causes havoc and can destroy, but when all is well its heaven on earth for sure.
I felt the emptiness and longing as I scrolled down.
Written with skill
Bless you for sharing
Babs x

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the_stoic

7 Years Ago

thank you so much for stopping by !
That was very poetic. The repetition in it, gave a very effortless flow to the piece.
Nicely done! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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