Forgive me ...

calling out to she who's my life

Forgive me
for your hate isn't something I can take
My feelings for you were never fake.

Forgive me
for I pine for you
Without you my beats will be painful, whatsoever few.

Forgive me
for I long to be fed by your tender hands
The nimble fingers that weave magic akin to a wand.

Forgive me
for without you I am all alone
Herein lies a void, only if it could be shown.

Forgive me
for 'I love you' ain't just a line
It’s a compendium of my emotions, left unbound by time.

Forgive me
for without you my nights are blue
Staring at the crescent moon, all i can ever think of is you.

Forgive me
for redemption is all i seek
I will henceforth be cautious, even turn meek.

Forgive me
for I want to hold you once again
Just to reinstate the belief that I am still sane.

   Forgive me
for I want to see the sweet smile on your face

The gleam that drives away melancholy without a trace.

Forgive me
for all my dreams are cast around you
Once shattered, they won't be build anew.

Forgive me
for I have lost possession of my heart
It's yours now, even death won't do it part.

Forgive me
for i crave to wipe away your tears
Transcend with you to a utopian world where there ain't no fear.

Forgive me
for at times i went overboard
And behaved as a lout belonging to the horde.

Forgive me
for "You know me inside out" is all i can say
To regain your trust my lady, any price i am ready to pay.

Forgive me
for with you inside, i was never alone
I brazenly faced the world to which i now fall prone.

Forgive me
for my soul is already taken
Watching you walk away, my inner core is shaken.

Forgive me
for nyctalgia is slowly beginning to grow
Rendering me weak at the knees, forcing me to kowtow.

Forgive me
for its hard to deal with the pain of losing you everywhere i go
I can no longer put on a show.

Forgive me
for all i beg for is one last try
The last chance before you turn away and say goodbye.

Forgive me
for however naive this may sound
You are the only ethereal beauty this mortal has ever found.

Forgive me

for till my last breath i'll keep praying to the Heavens above

awaiting to hear from my angel , the three magical words of Love.

Forgive me
for i can't stop loving you
It's something that i will always do.

Forgive me...

Author's Note

honest reviews are most welcome .. i have poured my heart out to shell out these words ..

Reviews

[Liza]

the literal wording flowed smoothly
the emotions felt like they were genuinely expressed
sometimes i wondered if you were asking forgiveness from a lover and other times i was wondering if the forgiveness you really seek is from self for giving so much to another that does not give back...
you inspired a lot of emotion and that in itself makes a great write.

[Bette]

this is honestly great i like the repetition for give me, because when you truly mean it that's all you can think, over and over. your flow was good. and your thoughts continued nicely to the next line. well done

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

This was an easy read for me, smooth and flowing ..
Your emotions poured out here ... overflowed...
I like the repetition of "Forgive me". this made my heart ache.
A beautiful poem..

Chloe

"Forgive me
for i crave to wipe away your tears
Transcend with you to a utopian world where there ain't no fear"

Like this verse very much.

[Moflo]

It is clear that you flowed your heart out and I think it came out really good. I like the repetition a lot and the passion behind it is just awesome. Great job.

[Lena]

It would be hard not to forgive you because the intensity poured out here is raw and palpable. Equally scary would be the consideration of forgive you because so deep and intense a love might be frightening as a boarders on obsession. This peace weaves a precarious spell of light and dark, hypnotically creating yearning and trepidation all at the same time. A very spell binding read expressed from a very intense soul.

[Bethany]

It is certainly evident that you have poured out your heart here, beautiful words.

[Inkcognito]

*grabbing a Kleenex*
A heart gripping, gut wrenching, emotive and deep, heartfelt write. The yearning, craving and dire desire to reconnect, reconcile and rekindle a love lost is unmistakable and the repetition in each stanza brings this message very clearly to the fore. A powerful, yet ouchee read indeed!

[India Brooks]

Forgive me
for without you I am all alone
Herein lies a void, only if it could be shown.

I am shaken by this stunning piece.

[.]

That is definitely from the heart..each stanza was raw..and the repetition worked really well...

[Anicca]

Lovely piece, the words flowed so nicely. I loved the layout and rhyming pattern within this poem, you somehow managed to take a very conventional rhyming pattern and make it interesting. I loved the repetition of 'forgive me' and how you also ended it with those two simple words as well.

[Dinesh Sairam]

I don't know what to say.. Though I have a concept in my mind that heart break poems are amateurish (Because all the beginner poets either write on the splendors of love or heart breaks), this is certainly not one. With some rhymes and a touching idea, this poem could go on forever. But, it has a certain lovely ring to it. I guess that's what stops me from critiquing this. And I do know that poems from the heart are always special :) Keep writing.