It's not Good bye ...

It's not Good bye ...

A Poem by the_stoic
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Love stays forever .. people may move on but two loving souls never bid each other good bye .

"

Till in silent prayers i continue to pray
for something that i can't say
Till the clothes hue the dye
It's not goodbye .

Till i get to gaze fondly at thy sweet face
and fold thee in my faint embrace
Till the rivers don't run dry
It's not goodbye .

Till the night i get to be near you to keep
draw away thy pain and let my heart weep
Till i finally shut-eye
It's not goodbye .

Till my heart considers you his own
though no affection is displayed or shown
Till thy name makes me turn shy
It's not goodbye .

Till the moon basks in the glory of the night
making the sea ebb in its light
Till the Almighty doesn't turn wry
It's not goodbye .

Till the memories of our love remain
even if out of my life there ain't anything left to gain
Till my spirit buckles up to give another try
It's not goodbye ...

© 2010 the_stoic


Author's Note

the_stoic
listening to "It's not goodbye" o.s.t - Sweet November inspired me to pen this down ..

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Lovely poem...love is compared to so many beautiful things...but all are so inadequate in describing it...it's that special...indescribable actually, although we try...
I notice once in a while you tuck in a "thy" instead of "your". One is contemporary...the other is old English...Shakespearian, perhaps...I wonder if you might want to be consistent with this...one way or the other...tiny anomaly I noticed...
Last stanza...perhaps replace "...there ain't anything left to gain" with "there's naught to gain"...
the poem is great...the sentiments tender...I think every comment has that in common...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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YES!...true love stays for eternity, never to say goodbye. Oh my heart...such sweet sentiment, beauty, heartfelt emotion, deep tenderness portrayed
...such a wonderful, romantic soul you have...lucky is the one you love!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great Poem!
It touches me much, and the emotion is deep,
a adorable writing!

Posted 11 Years Ago


This was another wondeful poem! I enjoy all your poems so much! :) And this one was beautiful and with so much meaning and power behing every stanza! I love it so much!
"Till i get to gaze fondly at thy sweet face
and fold thee in my faint embrace"

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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This is such a wonderful and beuatiful write. I can feel the inspiration. Each line continues growing in inspiration. Well written.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

so lovely
the heart never knows love's end
or beginning
only the mind does
thought provoking expression

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was a pleasure to read! It is a very important lesson to learn,Love,whether it lasts a lifetime,or just a month...one Never forgets the other... Excellent..Also Love may or may not come back for us..but we keep the hope alive! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely poem...love is compared to so many beautiful things...but all are so inadequate in describing it...it's that special...indescribable actually, although we try...
I notice once in a while you tuck in a "thy" instead of "your". One is contemporary...the other is old English...Shakespearian, perhaps...I wonder if you might want to be consistent with this...one way or the other...tiny anomaly I noticed...
Last stanza...perhaps replace "...there ain't anything left to gain" with "there's naught to gain"...
the poem is great...the sentiments tender...I think every comment has that in common...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a beautiful, profound expression of the deepest love.. love that never dies... Powerful voiced and lifting.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I see from this beautiful poem you have a spirit mate that you s=intertwined the very root of yourself, in a way no one no knows but the two of you. Enjoy, and keep the love Alive, as it grows! She always comes back. :-) Blessings ~ Jude :-)


Posted 12 Years Ago


This was so beautiful...my favorite line "Till my spirit buckles up to give another try"

Posted 12 Years Ago



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