Rainy days ..

Rainy days ..

A Poem by the_stoic
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no day can be as romantic as a rainy day ..

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Oh! how the rainy days caress

dripping the panes in silver, with finesse.
I curl up in Her theme
as I swim the deep waters of mine dream.
Holding my endearing little angel and getting drenched
a moment to cherish, deeply entrenched..


© 2010 the_stoic


Author's Note

the_stoic
those who are blessed to be with their Love in this season very well know what it feels like .. i was inspired by craig's "Umbrella man"

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yes, dear, this is a little gem. I also think there is nothing so romantic. If ever you offer a woman shelter from the rain- be it in your arms or under your umbrella, be prepared.... it happened to me once and I love that man still.... many many years later :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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There is such a dreamish beauty here, can feel the depth of this treasured moment. You've created a tableau, a living picture of love found drifting around you like the rain. Absolutely wondrous!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love how you used the rainy day here. I love storms and the rain. the make for some very interesting times with the one you love. This is a detailed write for such a short piece and you get your thoughts out clearly.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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enwrapped rapture~ beautiful sound poured with tender care into each line~

Posted 10 Years Ago


beautiful sentiments. I agree, there are no days like rainy days. These lines really captured my imagination.

'I curl up in Her theme
as I swim the deep waters of mine dream.'

Smiling at you

Tai, a bit of a dreamer too




Posted 10 Years Ago


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I could not agree better
I love the rain awesome feeling.
Great choice of words.
Thanks for sharing

Best wishes

Posted 10 Years Ago


Feel-good fiction :D :) What do you suppose by 'Dripping the panes in silver'? I didn't get that one :) Other lines were perfect and sensual :) Keep writing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That's a great poem!
Short and full of emotions!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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