my Fairy

my Fairy

A Poem by the_stoic































she exudes warmth in myriad ways


weaving life's tapestry with exquisite shades


'tis why my soul silently craves and prays


to be in her proximity for the rest of my days..


© 2010 the_stoic


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This one of my new favorites! It is so simple and sweet. I like the reference to tapestry and weaving, it adds a nice element. It ended sweetly. The stanzas are mature and sophisticated. Great job with this one!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love the picture! I find the pace of your work very pleasant and the rhyming wonderfuly done. Great Job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This a good piece and I adore it

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this a post card paradise

Posted 10 Years Ago


this is really sweet!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Gentle and loving words, subtle, sincere .. beautiful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such sorrow and beauty combined, wistful and needing.......I love the idea of her being a fairy.......and her weaving of colours and emotions..........you write with such tenderness that it hurts.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a wonderful thing youy seem to have touched upon your inner voice and created a new thing here.You have grown

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a stunning expression of love to that special person whom you never want to be without.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Four lines from the most romantic
region of a poets hearts muse.

Fabulous tribute to your fairy. Love the title. Love the feeling.

Smiling at you

Tai, all of a flutter

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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