Moment

Moment

A Poem by the_stoic




















 

when all the good times in my life I compare

there is one moment that stands out as rare.

'tis when you had stroked my cheeks with care

and staring into thine eyes, my heart i could bare...

© 2010 the_stoic


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That's such a romantic and lovely poem. I'm touched by its beauty. So tender and gentle. The woman must be a really lucky one. Wonderful poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Blissful love :)
Tenderly wrenching :)
xx

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awww... this is so sweet! I love it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

so romantic as always.....with tenderness and a raw depth.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lovely and ever gentle~

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ah...we all treasure moments like these...

Posted 9 Years Ago


According to me, the poem is still incomplete. But no dots on these lines. Perhaps you could replace 'Stroked' with 'kissed' :)

Keep writing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such special words for a priceless moment in time. Beautiful

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this sums up how we can feel deep emotions of love and connection to another person in just a few short lines. Job well done with this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sooooooooo beautiful and touching! great write

Posted 9 Years Ago



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