Moment

Moment

A Poem by the_stoic




















 

when all the good times in my life I compare

there is one moment that stands out as rare.

'tis when you had stroked my cheeks with care

and staring into thine eyes, my heart i could bare...

© 2010 the_stoic


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That's such a romantic and lovely poem. I'm touched by its beauty. So tender and gentle. The woman must be a really lucky one. Wonderful poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Blissful love :)
Tenderly wrenching :)
xx

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awww... this is so sweet! I love it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

so romantic as always.....with tenderness and a raw depth.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lovely and ever gentle~

Posted 10 Years Ago


Ah...we all treasure moments like these...

Posted 10 Years Ago


According to me, the poem is still incomplete. But no dots on these lines. Perhaps you could replace 'Stroked' with 'kissed' :)

Keep writing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such special words for a priceless moment in time. Beautiful

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this sums up how we can feel deep emotions of love and connection to another person in just a few short lines. Job well done with this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sooooooooo beautiful and touching! great write

Posted 10 Years Ago



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the_stoic

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