Monday morning blues

Monday morning blues

A Poem by the_stoic
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a feeling that we all have experienced and dread like anything ..

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knocking at your door are the Monday morning blues

when one needs to reluctantly dig into the formal shoes
and stall the dreams of going on a quaint cruise
we wish to constantly hit the alarm to snooze
alas there isn't such an option to choose
rather one has to rack his brains and put it to use
whilst constantly bearing the brunt and abuse
as the day nears an end you pick up a bottle of booze
to numb your senses and soothe the indelible bruise 
thus keeps on moving a life that seems highly abstruse
making you at times wonder - "why did all this i choose ?"

© 2011 the_stoic


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the_stoic
just another of my random writes which everyone can relate to ..

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ahhhhhhh.....these are like feelings oozing out of every employee after a warm,intimate holiday.we feel like robots and radicalised bodies which have been given directives to act and worka nd eat and walk ...nice one guda ..monday blues are really the greatest distress..........

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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aaaah...why did not I read this before??was going through your writes and boom "monday blues"...haha, got to read this...this is the everyday story of us poor souls ...but I always console myself thinking about the coming weekend ...and yes spend the weekend again thinking about coming monday...urgh!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

havnt yet borne d "superlative" brunt of monday morning blues yet...bt i do knw hw dreadful dey actually r... ! mondays full of miseries well expressed ..!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm well accustomed to monday morning blues...we used to have a monday test every monday which i always used to slip away from...and still monday brings so much of inertial feelings of saturday evenings and sundays..

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

entertaining and fun. thank you! i needed to hear these words :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is the case for most in the industrialized world all tied to the machine

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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TJ
Ugh...story of my life

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That is me!!Every Monday and all those awful feelings!!Great write and well sussed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lol I vote to do away with Mondays

Posted 9 Years Ago


ahhhhhhh.....these are like feelings oozing out of every employee after a warm,intimate holiday.we feel like robots and radicalised bodies which have been given directives to act and worka nd eat and walk ...nice one guda ..monday blues are really the greatest distress..........

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I know the feeling of this poem. In the old days. I appreciated going to work. Today I must force myself to drive and enter the building. I like this poem. Last line was very good. Always good to end the poem with a question. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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