Celestial Love

Celestial Love

A Poem by the_stoic
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found my long lost love for star gazing :)

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Gazing at the starlit sky I reminisce

Of my halcyon childhood days

Of the endless summer nights

Spent watching the glittering gems

Wonder where it all got lost

Is this what I wanted to turn into

Failing to even find the constellations

No you didn't, comes an answer

From the celestial czarina

As i realize my folly and apologize

She forgives and twinkles twice

Thus gets rebuilt the bond once broken

Between the eternal beauty and her admirer!


© 2012 the_stoic


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A beautiful poem. I like the places you took me with your words. The star on a clear night away from the city. Can bring energy and hope to a tire heart. Would be nice to keep the spirit of youth. To look at the sky and dream. I like the ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Ahh, the night is full of mystery. It's full of dreams and wishes.. only the stars know them as we all whisper our deepest desires to them up above. Lovely poem! You brought a smile to my face here. I loved it and enjoyed the read. Great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The sky reminds us that the universe is an endless mystery but it is worth the journey cause it is full of endless beauty.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful poem. I like the places you took me with your words. The star on a clear night away from the city. Can bring energy and hope to a tire heart. Would be nice to keep the spirit of youth. To look at the sky and dream. I like the ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The night with all its wonder and beauty. When we grow older sometimes we forget to look at the beauty that surrounds us every day and enjoy those breath taking moments. I say I want to be the admirer.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mind blowing.
This is one of my favorites.
And(night,stars, moon) means alot for me, so i cant express what i really felt towards this one.
Thanks alot!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beauty crawls from your ink in the most brilliant of hues~

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Stunning. I loved it. The choice of words evokes a sense of majesty and mystery, mingled together. Well penned. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 4, 2012
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Tags: stars, constellation, celestial, love

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the_stoic

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