Lonely

Oh lonely to the land I walk

Lonely heart,
Lonely love,
Lonely fun,

Lonely love whispers

Lonely kissing,

Yuan for lonely mate
Lonely loneliness...

Reviews

[Melissa Frost]

Isn't it strange how we can surrounded by people but be completely and utterly lonely? I feel this myself.

Simplicity :-)

[Vria P Crow]

Loneliness is something we have all felt. However, we must also remember we are never alone. We are social animals; it is the desire for human contact. All we have to do is ask to emerge from isolation.

Overall, "Lonely" is concise with an emotive stance.

Well done, my friend!

[Emmy]

I love how, though short, it caries so much emotion! Nice poem

[Lydia Shutter]

Filled with pathos....so emotive. Lydi**

[Priscilla Sayers]

Very lonely:(. Maybe expand on the thoughts of the lonely person, the depth of the emotion. A very straightt forward write. Keep expressing dear poet.

[rnuff]

So simply amazing!
Love this.

[teardrop]

simply wonderful

[Mystic_Angel]

simply beautiful. I love it :)

[InsanityWriter]

Nice job. :)