A Poem by i cant stay behind

Oh lonely to the land I walk


Oh lonely to the land I walk

Lonely heart,
Lonely love,
Lonely fun,

Lonely love whispers

Lonely kissing,

Yuan for lonely mate
Lonely loneliness...

© 2012 i cant stay behind

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Isn't it strange how we can surrounded by people but be completely and utterly lonely? I feel this myself.

Simplicity :-)

Posted 6 Years Ago

Loneliness is something we have all felt. However, we must also remember we are never alone. We are social animals; it is the desire for human contact. All we have to do is ask to emerge from isolation.

Overall, "Lonely" is concise with an emotive stance.

Well done, my friend!

Posted 7 Years Ago

I love how, though short, it caries so much emotion! Nice poem

Posted 7 Years Ago

Filled with pathos....so emotive. Lydi**

Posted 7 Years Ago

Very lonely:(. Maybe expand on the thoughts of the lonely person, the depth of the emotion. A very straightt forward write. Keep expressing dear poet.

Posted 8 Years Ago

So simply amazing!
Love this.

Posted 8 Years Ago

simply wonderful

Posted 8 Years Ago

simply beautiful. I love it :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

Nice job. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on November 25, 2012
Last Updated on December 29, 2012


i cant stay behind
i cant stay behind

seoul, pentecostal, South Korea

Am a humble personality ,God fearing person ,i love to watch prosperous people and I like to act like them ,live like them , dream like them and making friendship to them . Am a business developer, .. more..


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