Snowflakes and Maple Seeds

Snowflakes and Maple Seeds

A Poem by GuineaPig
"

just something i wrote

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She smiles 
At a single perfect snowflake
It floats, carefree
And lands in her styrofoam cup of hot chocolate.

A silver tree rustles its sleepy branches
And shakes its twirling maple seeds
Down to the ground
One clings to her hair.

A paddle swishes
Throwing up a spray of clear droplets
And arcing high in the air
Propelling her canoe
Without a sound
She sweeps it again.


A leaf dances
Swirling in its bright red dress
Somersaulting through the crispy air
And landing on the thin page
Of the novel in her lap. 

She smiles
The leaf falls asleep between the covers of her closed book.

© 2010 GuineaPig


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GuineaPig
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Wow, what a beautiful imagery created here! This poem is very calming and caring, just what the person below has said. Very sweet, too; nice one! :)


Posted 14 Years Ago


Beautiful. Calming and charming. The imagery was so bright and you could really see the scene. Perfect.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on March 16, 2010
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I'm not the best at writing, but I like it, so I really really appreciate constructive criticism, because I'd like to get better at it. I like poetry a lot... I'm not experienced much... that's all more..

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