The Evening of Birds

On the Evening of Birds

i pass my body my flesh

to you. (In sheaves)

The bark of me,

the ripe fruits of my labor.

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

Quite intriguing, very nice and has great imagery. Good work.

[Safrina]

short, but so so beautiful :)

[wolfshrew]

this was a very enjoyable little peice.

[Sister Suzie]

Nice Thanks for entering my contest

[W.k.kortas]

Tight, almost haiku or cinquain-like, but nicely evocative; no fluff, no wasted motion, just each word pulling its weight. Very nice little piece.