Crab Fishing off Assateague, Maryland

The sea was bright, gleaming

across the dock.

The Morning sun, shine

horizontal rays

refracting over the seas

surface.

With a vast ocean before me

Rocking, the dock lifted

me up and up, as i waited

to pull a meal, clawing 

out of the darkness.

Reviews

[jenniewren (J.W. Bouwma..]

mmm yes this reminded me so strongly of my new england roots..

gorgeously constructed... and the syntax is perfect, drawing out the moment with a simple delicacy