pillow pink

where's the wonder, i wonder?

where
the birds swim
below in the
pillow pink ocean

and fish
fly above
in the glimmer
green sky

but a cynic
will still
find a fault
in the faeriedust

only a snob
breathes
contempt
with a sigh--

Reviews

[E.j.aka.Hannah]

I love this...the poem gives a sense of looking into the beauty of a sunset, and how people just walk by it without giving into its magic. Really paints a picture.