fairy wisdom

Once upon a time,

There was a young girl

Lying on her rosy bed

Staring  at the stars

Enjoying its reflection

On her face and her night

Suddenly, there was something weird

Flying and shining, Like a cool breeze

She was amazed and dazzled ,

She jumped across the  window

When…Something hit her cheek

And made her fell of the ground

She rubbed her eyes and said

It's just a dreamy night

She looked again , round and round

A fairy was flying with sparks

Spreading light all over the dark

The fairy stopped flying and looked in her eyes

How are you girl, are you fine?

The fairy asked , in calm and quite..

Oh my god ! the girl said in terrify

Is this real, are you the fairy….?

The fairy interrupted her…

Yes darling I am the fairy

I live in every story…. you've ever read

With a big smile the girl asked

And the stick and dust , are they real as well ?!

The fairy answered , oh yes dear …

Are you ready to make a wish ,will you dare ?

The girl answered , sure I will

I want to be a fairy like you ,

This is a wish in my heart for years…

Can you make it real , please , please , please ?!

The fairy whispered to the girl's ears

Why on earth you want to be like me?!

The girl answered , are you serious..!

I want to be free….

Flying, and soaring like a bee

I want to land on roses

I want to embrace the stars….

And I want to help the mankind,

By blowing the dust over their heads

Every wish becomes , yes !

I want to be beautiful more and more

With sparkling wings , and fine dress

I want to be like you….

The fairy hummed….

Now I see, she spun and said

Dear girl listen to me

You are beautiful, I can add no more…

You already kind, with dazzling mind

Yes;  I can fly, dance, and give

But sweetie you are human what more than this?

You're capable of doing things I can never do…

I am only a fictional creature

Stuck in books and owns no future

But you , you are real fairy indeed

Beautiful , smart, lovely , and kind…

And you can give like me and more

Without magical dust and stick of  wood

All what you need ,just  a pure heart

And you already are , fairy and more…

So smile for me girl , with sparkling eyes 

And let's have a last dance together, before the sun rise…

This was a night that the girl, would never forget

She took the fairy advice, in her daily steps

She realized that she was already princess

With what she got inside her chest

She didn't need a tiara or a shiny dress

Because , she already have a heart of princess

She was lovely, kind, forgiving

But heart with pains that cannot be forgotten….

 

Author's Note

i really like it , i hope you do :)

Reviews

[Neha]

Its wonderful.

I specially loved these lines:
"I want to be free….
Flying, and soaring like a bee
I want to land on roses
I want to embrace the stars….
And I want to help the mankind,
By blowing the dust over their heads
Every wish becomes , yes !
I want to be beautiful more and more
With sparkling wings , and fine dress
I want to be like you"
This is childhood dream of many girls :D

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

yeah, thank you ^_^

[Frieda P]

This is the perfect 'feel good' piece of writing. It's whimsical and magical just like a fairy tale with a message. Nicely spun! Love it.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thank you Freida so much , i appreciate your opinion ^_^

[Frieda P]

T'was my pleasure!

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

:)

[Ahmad Cox]

Very sweet and magical. I actually have a poem called fairy you might appreciate. I will put it in your box :)

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thank you ^_^ , yes i would love to read it .

[Ahmad Cox]

I just sent it. :)

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Ok , i will see it now :)

[Crissie Luce]

I really like this one:-) This is one of your best:-)

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Ohh , thank you i love this one too because its expresses me so much :)

[Crissie Luce]

:-)

[once upon a time]

This is really beautiful. It makes me think of being a child, dreaming of fairies; wishing to be one. I like the message that it sends at the end about not having to wish to be someone else because you are already as perfect as you can be.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

yes this is exactly the message , thank you for your comment
i really appreciate it ^___^

[Deron Alexis]

this is beautiful dude really work of art

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

art like what u mean a story??
and by the way i am not a dude , i am a girl :)

[Deron Alexis]

sorry dudet

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

:)

[Deron Alexis]

i meant art as in something that's cool and inspiring to look at

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

yes you are right, i just imagine the whole story in my head
and i try to draw it as words on paper ..