Helpless

Helpless

A Poem by Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

Seeing you like that…

Sitting there around the mess

Tears falling clearing your face

From the sadness which hanging there

Between your wrinkles ...

And the worries hunting your brain

Seeing you in that way

Made my heart bleeding with sorrow

I hate to feel helpless ,

I hate watching you suffer

All what I can do

Is to wipe your tears by a tender touch

Of my wounded heart

To kiss your forehead and whisper

In your ears, "Dad don't worry

Everything will be alright"

© 2013 Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )


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Very caring write, creates the scene so well, leading upto the compassion
at the end....
seeing parents as being strong is what we are used to, so seeing the reverse
can take getting used to, but all we can do is return some of the love they
gave us :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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loved this one a lot
very tender and touching


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

^_^
solid content you just need to work on your editing and grammer

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

Thanks :) I will
Amazing piece!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

Thank you Jeff :)
amazing


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very caring write, creates the scene so well, leading upto the compassion
at the end....
seeing parents as being strong is what we are used to, so seeing the reverse
can take getting used to, but all we can do is return some of the love they
gave us :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow well expressed Hadeel well I know you have know problem with self expression but well done either way





Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

hhhhhhh its ok ^_^ it happens my freind
Deron Alexis

7 Years Ago

lol it does
Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

yeah :)
Aww very sweet and compelling example of father son love. I really liked it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

thanks :)
Oh Sweet luv...how you lift a parents heart with your compassion & love... You are have such a brightness in this world Hadeel !

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

Oh god so sweet to hear this from you , i am honored by your comments :)
Renée

7 Years Ago

as I am honored to read your hearts song.. Blessing to you & your family ( :
Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

^_^ (heart )

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Added on January 16, 2013
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Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )
Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

Amman, Jordan



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I am a girl with a huge ambition, I know how to express my feelings very well , And i can do it either by writing or drawing. but recently i am heading to write more and more , and i hope that i could.. more..

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