Whispering memories

Whispering memories

A Poem by Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )
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Some times when we are sitting alone with no where to go the memories just come suddenly , without a permission and start messing with our feelings..

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The late  memories came from no where  

 And  whispered in my heart

 told me a few words

That tinkles in my ears

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Don't let the past hunt you

Don't let the grief hug you

With his strong arms… with his dark feel

Look at the mirror, and tell me what do you see?

Is that you're reflection ? or the ghost behind me?

Spread your wings among sunlight

Let the soreness evaporates through your heart

Come on ! hold my hand and fly with me

Light your soul with a flaming hope

Vanquish the dark of despair and sore

Open an new chapter in your life

Full of hope and candles light

© 2013 Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )


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Great..one..... "full of hope + candle;s light."........i really liked + loved your this poem...in your poem there's a bit of rhyming touch...as i saw.......i liked this one too...i love your tittle "whispering-memories".......here your word's are so nice ........so smooth.........i'd enjoyed it...
"light you're soul with the flaming hope,
your whispering tittle is so tip-top,
is your poem damn..damn....bad.....then i'd say...nope...nope.........nope.....
i liked+loved your beautiful thought's,
i wish that i'll further see such sort of poetry...as i hope...hope....hope............"
very nice poem.........92.7/100...........
have a nice day........!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

Thank you ^_^ for your sweet words



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It's really good with a hopeful tone...loved reading it :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

Glad you loved it :)
This is beauty written down.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

Oh god !! so sweet of you , thank you so much i appreciate it ^_^
A most moving and uplifting message. Nicely done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

Thanks dear :)
The telling of memories cloudy and inept is a great way to portray oneself, well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

Yeah it is , Thank you :)
memories are either nice or sad. when they are sad, we have to learn from them so we shouldnt do the same mistakes in the future, if they are nice, we would better to make them stronger by trying to get them back. i have really enjoyed reading this nice poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Great..one..... "full of hope + candle;s light."........i really liked + loved your this poem...in your poem there's a bit of rhyming touch...as i saw.......i liked this one too...i love your tittle "whispering-memories".......here your word's are so nice ........so smooth.........i'd enjoyed it...
"light you're soul with the flaming hope,
your whispering tittle is so tip-top,
is your poem damn..damn....bad.....then i'd say...nope...nope.........nope.....
i liked+loved your beautiful thought's,
i wish that i'll further see such sort of poetry...as i hope...hope....hope............"
very nice poem.........92.7/100...........
have a nice day........!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

Thank you ^_^ for your sweet words
a great piece.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

Thanks :)
they do have a way of sneaking up on you !

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

Yeah ! tell me about it !
Renée

7 Years Ago

chuckling !
Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

^_^
wow really hopeful really deep i love the way you encourage the person as if you knew what its like to fly

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

Thank you my friend :)
Wow, this is beautifully written. Well done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

Thank you ^_^
s y e

7 Years Ago

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Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )
Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

Amman, Jordan



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I am a girl with a huge ambition, I know how to express my feelings very well , And i can do it either by writing or drawing. but recently i am heading to write more and more , and i hope that i could.. more..

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