Stolen Moments

Stolen Moments

A Poem by Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )
"

When we lose those precious moments

"


He sat there on his dark thrown

Laughing and thinking of every

Single moment he stole...

staring at his crystal ball

enjoying disappointments of them all


When someone wanted to say I love you

But he couldn't do…


When someone was busy to say to his parents

I miss you …

And now he is crying over their grave

Hugging the sand covering their bodies, and their souls


When someone lost his friends because he was

So proud to say I need you by my side

And now he is a lone immersed in regret and sore


When someone wanted to catch the train to say

Please don't go away but he missed it, it was too late...


When someone wanted to apologize for hurting a close person to his heart, but he couldn't say...


When he stole a smile, a love, a tear

He is too cold to feel or hear

The wounded song of their sobs


He is there laughing and stare

While he makes us drowning in our sins and tears

He is the dark side of you and me

The side which makes us cruel and mean…

© 2013 Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )


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this is a very eloquently poignant poem depicting when one misses a loved one due to them physically no longer being with them, i.e.: moving, or passed on...or when one takes another's love/friendship for granted. very relateable and beautifully penned. thanks for sharing :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

Welcome I am very glad that you liked it and felt that way , while reading it :)
ms. barrie

7 Years Ago

:)



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Poised and elegant, a quite trip for your reader, well done, good read.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

Thank you :)
we should always try to be thankful for what and who we have in our lives, and to be appreciative. some things can be very fleeting. It is sad to only realize too late how much some people really mean to us.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

Yes it is :) thanks for your review ..
very nice and mind provoking poem. you are right, sometimes we take others for granted but when we feel we have lost them, we feel all the regret..

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

Yes we do :) Thanks for your review :)
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honestly...... im not gonna sugar coat this. I couldnt understand this. The grammar was just too alien for me. I'm sure it was a gret idea. The parts I could understand were nice.

Dont let tht keep you from writing. practice makes perfect

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

Thanks i will :)
this is a very eloquently poignant poem depicting when one misses a loved one due to them physically no longer being with them, i.e.: moving, or passed on...or when one takes another's love/friendship for granted. very relateable and beautifully penned. thanks for sharing :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

Welcome I am very glad that you liked it and felt that way , while reading it :)
ms. barrie

7 Years Ago

:)
I love this piece a lot
the ending was simply perfect ( I did not expect it at all so it's great)
yet I wish you would pay more attention to the rhyme
Well done Hadooleh ;)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

Thank you , i will inshallah ;)
Poignant lovely write and so true we live in regret and we all have that shadow side.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

Thank you ^_^
very well done to personify darkness I love it

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

:)
This is Amazingly Great!! Hadeel this is very deep! #Loved it!:-)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

^_^ I am very happy about it , Thanks :)
you know..i can really relate to this piece right now...some of my loved ones are so far away..to far to be with in their time of need...You captured that feeling of being torn well...but is is cruel & mean? or just a defense until one is strong enough to face? Gives me lots to think about !

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

Nice Renee :) I am glad it made u feel that way ..

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Added on January 22, 2013
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Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )
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I am a girl with a huge ambition, I know how to express my feelings very well , And i can do it either by writing or drawing. but recently i am heading to write more and more , and i hope that i could.. more..

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