Rising Soul

Rising Soul

A Poem by Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )




When her body hit the bottom

When her soul lost the blossom

When she surrendered to the lord

Of the darkness and gloominess

The sky opened wide ,

With a brightening light

A glowing angel  arose and said

Hold yourself together

And give me your hand , I will raise your soul

To a holy land , Where There is no pain or suffering

© 2013 Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )


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When her body hit the bottom

When her soul lost the blossom

When she surrendered to the lord

Of the darkness and gloominess

The sky opened wide ,

With a brightening light

A glowing angel arose and said

Hold yourself together

And give me your hand , I will raise your soul

To a holy land , Where there is no pain or suffering


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

Thank you ^_^ So so much , i appreciate it :)
John Alexander McFadyen

7 Years Ago

my pleasure Hadeel.
Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

:)



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Beautiful!

Posted 4 Years Ago


oh wow this is so wonderful, I really enjoyed this one.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

Great , thank you i am glad that you enjoyed it ^_^
Sounds very religious but not in a bad way. The religious language is refreshing and powerful. Nicely written, I really enjoyed it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

Thanks lewis i appreciate it :)
Lovely sentiment, beatific write. Nice one Hadeel.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

Thank you dear ^_^
great write... we all at one point in life hit rock bottom, but i believe that keeping our heads held high and keeping our spirits up will allow us to maintain hope... love the piece and thank you for sharing

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

Welcome , I'm so glad that you loved it :)
I really liked this piece my friend.....Whisk

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

Glad you did ^_^
Hope lands strong in the hands of all, very well written, good read.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

Thank you , I appreciate your lovely visit :)
Thomas Fitzgerald

7 Years Ago

your welcome.
Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

:)
i think the angel here is hope. when we feel so down, only hope can help us to struggle again. i really like how you have expressed that in a very nice way.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

I 'm glad that you liked it :)
This is beautifully written. Sweet

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

s y e

7 Years Ago

Anytime darling! ;-)
Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

;)
s y e

7 Years Ago

^^
Short strong and lovely
good job

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

Thank you yaz ;)

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Added on January 27, 2013
Last Updated on January 27, 2013
Tags: Sad, bottom, misery, light, sky, angel

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Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )
Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

Amman, Jordan



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I am a girl with a huge ambition, I know how to express my feelings very well , And i can do it either by writing or drawing. but recently i am heading to write more and more , and i hope that i could.. more..

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