Dark Sins

Dark Sins

A Poem by Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

       

Among the barbed woods of life

Her soul was seeking the light

Looking for a new day, a new delight

Fighting the demons of sins That nesting inside

Hunting her soul, confusing her mind

She was struggling to get a clue

A key to tell her what to do !

What is wrong ?, what is right?

Surrounded by a bubble of lies

Craving for the truth and  justice behind

She ran, she fought , and cried

She screamed …  she begged

But no one could hear her shout!

Her soul chained with silver lies and sins

Everything was getting dark , getting insane

There wasn't enough time to decide

No one came to risk her , no one dared to fight

They became slaves to the lord of dark

She didn't have much time

 She had to decide and make up her mind

The ravens were calling for her soul

She had to decide …

And she did!!!

Her soul's aura invaded the  wild dark

And defeated the evil that resides inside

Yes ! She chose to die with pride

over living chained in sins and lies ...

 

© 2013 Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )


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A classic charming tale of the great battle between a free soul and darkness.
I like this a lot and I love how fast you are improving

"Her soul's aura invaded the wild dark
And defeated the evil that resides inside
Yes ! She chose to die with pride
over living chained in sins and lies ..."

Well done Hadeel
Keep up the good write

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

Inshallah thank you dear :*



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Brilliant! Full of the darkness of lies and the light of truth.
Great write!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

Thanks ^_^
oh my. magnificent!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

^_^ So glad you liked it .
A dark piece of fantasy that ends in a triumph of good over evil.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

Thanks john ^_^ for your review , i appreciate it !
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To die fighting for your principles is a sacrifice few take, it is much easier to turn your back and run or hide. This opens up a lot of interesting questions.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

It is :) Thanks for your review :)
To live with nothing or to die with pride....it's really good...loved it!!! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

I'm glad you loved it !
Your narrative is so amazinggggg...
suspense and intensity throughout....

Love it :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

I'm so glad you loved it :) i wrote it when i was in the lab :P hhhhhh
SoulCrusader (Yas)

7 Years Ago

Hehehe, nice stuff :P
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I'm not sure if that's a happy ending or not Hadeel... ;-)

Seriously, my charming fairy, this is the best of yours by far that I've read. It's twisted and dark, has an element of fantasy and reality threaded within it. I do love this one! Brava, nicely pen'd.

'The ravens were calling for her soul'

Poor ravens are always getting a bad rap, but this line is fantastico!



Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

Wowwww!!! you made my night !!
hearing these words from you its such an honor Frieda !
I.. read more
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

haha, yes poor ravens...great poetry though! My pleasure ;-)
Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

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A classic tale of good vs evil, wth a twist. The twist being the writing is superb. It draws the reader in with sharp talons and does not release until the end confirms our beliefs. Very, very good.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

What a nice words you said , thank you so much jack i am honored by your words, thank you :)
Jack...

7 Years Ago

You are very welcome
Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

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AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hadeel you have to read what I just wrote "2013 Victory"!!! I wrote it before I read this!!! It describes what I just wrote!! If you have time, come by my page and read it!!! This is just Pure Awesomeness!! Wow........:-*

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

7 Years Ago

It is awesome !!! i will read it now :)
What do you think ??

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on February 3, 2013
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Tags: dark, sins, soul, aura, fight, struggle, lies, truth, die

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Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )
Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )

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