The Fourth Dimension

Something there is never enough of...

 

Before I met you

I thought that time

Was limited to

The here and now

But you changed all that

And now I find myself wondering

If there is not a place for us

Somewhere in time

 

My love, I never thought I could be

So in love, so totally and

Completely, unquestionably

Without a doubt,

Enthralled

By a man I have never

Met face to face.

 

But love you, I do…

Everything about you

The way you talk

The way you make me laugh,

The way you act when you’re

Angry with me

And the softness in your tone

When you tell me you love me

 

This makes no sense

But that doesn’t make it

Any less real

And though we still

Have no idea

How this will turn out

I have hope

That together we can

Overcome any obstacle

 

And that this love

Will stand the test of time

Because you and I both

Know that time

Is all we have

And that somewhere in time

There is a place for us

To be together

And all the time we need

Reviews

[KAREN BROWN]

I feel you don't have to see someone face to face to love someone with your whole heart.talking to the person the compation they give and love and understanding is a great feeling to feel. theres always a place for anyone who's in love, you just need to find where, in life theres always obstacles to over come but if its meant to be then it will happen in time.love is very strong and love can make it if you really want it.thank you for sharing this with me your writing is wonderful. karen

[☮]

Absence makes the heart grown fonder. Physical absence, that is. The most powerful presence is a spiritual and emotional one, which I see you're familiar with. I have been here and totally relate to the words expressed. Great job. This seemed to come straight from your heart. Many blessings.

[Windy]

Very loving and romantic. Such yearning for a love, someone you've never met, yet so very real. "This makes no sence, but that doesn't make it any less real..." an honest statement, this writing is full of hope. A good poem, flowed well and your words brought out the images...talk, laugh, softness of your tone...Good write and excellant read. Congrats... ;)

[Biohazard]

I see the connection between this poem and the other poem, is it the same man? Best of luck to you both.

[Michael X]

The fourth dimension- the passionate subtle ambience that weaves through- in and out is touching,
I really enjoyed the quality of thought surrendered with the flow, the romantic aspect is a pillowy

cloud floating in the skies of the heart, in saying, one gets a vivid impression with specific details
left open to personal interpretation, the way you bring the projection of time into perspective

creates a vision that balances what is being said, to need time and at the end have all that is needed
beautifully written, expression that delivers with substance and form with passion and emotion.
Take Care, Mike

[BenightedWhispers]

This is great! Showing how love has it's ups and downs is always interesting to read. I agree with you. There is never enough of love and time to spend with one another. Great job.