Blind Date

The title says it all!

filled with delight

at such a sight

this lady who wishes to meet me

with all this joy

she is so coy

in this state so wonderful to be

 

in our time

that is so fine

there are so many things to see

but my love

the coo of a dove

bodes no togetherness for we

Reviews

[Jacqueline Lopez]

The rhyming and the flow is really good and love how she is so coy. Nicely written.

[Luna]

i love the rhyming in this. i am so envious of anyone who can rhyme because i have such a terrible time with it. the subject is very creative too. i like it . great job.