Distance is but a moment away

if we are going to believe - then leap we must

suppress this exigency

stratum's of panic and uncertainty

 

belief awaits within our hearts

for fear to release his grip

 

over mind

 

shed the shell of discomfort

integrate nexus

for the spark has detonated to flames unprecedented

 

worry not of what may not become

rejoice in what has -

a friendship, an allegiance, a beginning

 

a chance  

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Leran Vakem]

This made me think of some things that has happened to me lately

Nice

[Dan Bullock]

A chance to leap! Then go young spirit, fly! Hah! I Very insightful and giving away a few clues to exact meaning but enough words to pin itself worthingly (it's a new word I just made up) onto the board of hope!

Aah...and a metaphor ;)

[dilettante1890]

Lovely!

[JRB]

very nice write,
Jan/uisiom

[PianoandPage]

thank you for this. i certainly hope that belief is in the wings of my heart.

a beautiful and sparkling poem that delivers a positive message.

[Panda]

Intresting piece, nice flow, great word usuage and description. I enjoyed this piece.

[Kiddx]

deep write and emotional

worry not of what may not become
rejoice in what has -
a friendship, an allegiance, a beginning
a chance

Love this stanza, this is well written.

[Des]

Very open for interpretation. I liked the way this one flowed. Agh, and it made me feel kind of dumb because I had to look up a couple of those words! But I love that about stuff I read. This is very articulate and I love it.

[jaime]

This may be my favorite of your poems because of the message. Fear is a strong enemy of belief...that's for sure. I really like the way your mind processes things...it's an adventure.

[☮]

I enjoyed this piece very much. Stratums... exigency. Interesting. Love your vocab usage.

Perhaps this is the internal battle of overanalyzing a new partner so much that the present is not enjoyed? As usual, your work is open for interpretation. That's what I gathered.

Nice piece, Lady A.