Virtues of Being a Being..

Virtues of Being a Being..

A Poem by Hamza
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this was written a year back when i had finally got a moment of solitude after losing out on some things i never thought i would ..

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O human, you are a being...
Your existence, is so precious..
O human, you exist, you sustain..
Your deeds are miraculous..

O human, you are a being..
You feel, what you feel..
O human, you expect, you express...
Your emotions are special...

O human, you are a being..
You desire, what should not be..
O human, you crave, you fall..
Your desires reach up to the forbidden..

O human, you are a being..
You smile, when you get to it..
O human, you forget, the end..
You believe you have, yet you haven't reached..

O human, you are a being..
You cry, when it ends..
O human, you lament, you kneel..
You want it back, what never existed..

O human, you are a being..
You beg, to go back..
O human, you stop, you turn..
To see a wall, you yourself made...

O human, you are a being..
You turn again, you wait..
O human, you wait, for nothing..
For what was, was; what is, is...

O human, little do you know..
That you chose, you moved..
O human, you did, but don't agree..
Instead of a straight path, you chose a curvy one...

O human, you are a being...
Bound to commit mistakes..
O human, but you must know..
Mistakes are a way, to reach to the righteous..

O human, you are a being..
Learning forever, learning forever..
O human, with each little mistake..
You step forwards, towards perfection.

© 2012 Hamza


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'O human, you are a being..
You desire, what should not be..
O human, you crave, you fall..
Your desires reach up to the forbidden..'
Brilliant poem, your words reflect everything we are and do. Written with immense craft, there is a very strong structure and repetition that I love. Amazing poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hamza

8 Years Ago

thank you for your nice words ...
:)



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'O human, you are a being..
You desire, what should not be..
O human, you crave, you fall..
Your desires reach up to the forbidden..'
Brilliant poem, your words reflect everything we are and do. Written with immense craft, there is a very strong structure and repetition that I love. Amazing poem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hamza

8 Years Ago

thank you for your nice words ...
:)
i spend alot of time dwelling on the stupid s**t I have done I cringe sometimes from memories of my mistakes this poem gives me a bit of peace

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hamza

8 Years Ago

i'm overwhelmed by your words .. mean a lot
thank you :)
Revolutionary

8 Years Ago

thank you for sharing
Hi Hamza, Loved the sentiment and some of the lines are sublime. Thought it became a little laboured in places and in length and perhaps a shorter punchier piece would have more impact and meaning.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hamza

8 Years Ago

thank you and would keep your advice in mind next time ... :)
Perfection - I enjoyed this so much because it speaks volumes of truths.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hamza

8 Years Ago

thank you :)
This is really good...something I'm sure a lot of people can relate to^^

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hamza

8 Years Ago

thank you very much .. :)
kublakhan27

8 Years Ago

No problem :)
In an age where life is cheap and the material is valued over the spiritual and humane, it is uplifitng to see such a young man write of being human and a person and the necessity of taking the road less travelled for a full and sentient life with such clarity and passion. I'm am sooo impressed! Wonderful Hamza!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hamza

8 Years Ago

thank you for your kind words ...
thanks for understanding the depth within ..
this.....is exquisite. i am at a loss for words here, and my friends will tell you that never happens to me. fantastic write!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hamza

8 Years Ago

i hope i made up for the mess i created on the other poem ...
thank you so much ... i'm overw.. read more
You are deffentally one of my favorite keep writing such great messages

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hamza

8 Years Ago

thanks a lot !
great piece of art :)
and message for the people of every age :)
keep writing this type of stuff

Posted 8 Years Ago


Hamza

8 Years Ago

thank you very much ...
happy writing ..
Muhammad Ibraheem

8 Years Ago

:)

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Hamza
Hamza

Jammu, Jammu & kashmir, India



About
Hamza .. that's me .. An Engineer by profession and a writer by Emotion ... I am 26... I am no different, I am not special .. I'm just a different face, and a few different fingerprints .. I am.. more..

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