MOONLIGHT SONATA

MOONLIGHT SONATA

A Poem by hanir



MOONLIGHT SONATA
It was a dark, magical night. 
We were under the same moonlight. 
You held my hand. 
For once I felt like I belonged. 
It was like a celestial attraction. 
A cosmic phenomenon. 
But you let go so soon. 
It was brief. 
Like a brief lunar eclipse. 
Now I'm left nostalgic.. 
listening to this soulful musical piece 
Of love and loneliness.

© 2015 hanir


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This is a really great poem! I really enjoyed reading this. Great work!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Love the title. I can envision the enclosed hands parting slowly too soon and it becomes a memory of nostalgia when a type of music is played; relived in the moment of the "soulful" sounds...the interpretation of excitement is mixed with a longing that can be felt in your word choice. Beautiful thoughts.

Posted 3 Years Ago


If I had a penny for every time I felt like this!

Really Good!

Posted 3 Years Ago


hanir

3 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing. 😊
How beautiful, even in the depths of loneliness, the heart can hear music, lovely!

Posted 3 Years Ago


hanir

3 Years Ago

Thanks for the review!😊
simple but beautiful with so much feeling

Posted 3 Years Ago


hanir

3 Years Ago

Thanks! 😊
Wow it is such a melodic piece. I was for a moment. Really beautiful!

Posted 4 Years Ago


hanir

3 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing. 😊
BeautiFul.....nostalgic words.....nostalgic music....drove me to my keyboard but I forgot some notes.....pulled out the sheet music....but my lazy fingers rebelled.......tx for bringing some music to my day....:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hanir

4 Years Ago

Glad to hear that. 😊
Thanks for reviewing..
Short sweet, nostalgaic. This is a beautiful piece, and it's timeless. Lovely :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hanir

4 Years Ago

Thank you for taking time to read and give such a nice review on my piece. I appreciate it deeply. .. read more
This is a lovely, bittersweet poem. I love the title. It has a way wrapping itself around the piece and putting it into perspective. Very nice.

Posted 4 Years Ago


hanir

4 Years Ago

Thanks for your lovely review! 😊
I deeply appreciate it.
we must know love to be lonely when it is no longer there in it's physical state...still, we can hold on to it and recall it's brevity when required...love the reference to music and the photo as well...enjoyed it very much...

Posted 4 Years Ago


hanir

4 Years Ago

Such a clever review. Thank you. And yes I took that photo. Blood moon, total lunar eclipse last Apr.. read more
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4 Years Ago

Great camera work...and you are welcome, of course :)

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