Pearl of Darkness

Pearl of Darkness

A Poem by earthtohannah

'I love you my darling,

Please say you do.

I see it in your eyes,

And you know it too'

 

I sighed in despair,

How to say?

I don't love you,

Not to this day.

 

'Please my love,

Just look deep inside.

You know that you care,

You are one of mine.'

 

I narrowed my eyes,

I am not part of you,

You don't know me at all,

How can I love you too?

 

'Just give me a chance,

I can make it right.

Give me your hand,

We'll dance through the night'

 

Stop with this now,

I go my own way,

I care for you not,

Hear what I have to say.

 

I belong to myself,

I hold my own heart,

The key does not fit,

Into it's counterpart.

 

Because I am the darkness,

Who opposes the light,

And I am the evil,

Who duels with the knight.

 

So don't say you love me,

You have the wrong girl.

I am the colour of darkness,

Not the light of a pearl.

© 2012 earthtohannah


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Hard to know what to say...this was lovely and carefully composed. So simple but had much to say if one looks deep within every thought you penned. I loved the last two stanzas the best. I truely did. Something about the "Not the light of a pearl" that just moved me there on that one. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Really nice poem, nice rhythm, nice rhyme. One of my favorite poems that you've written so far. Keep it up!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow! Nicely done. It has a great flow and use of imagery, and I especially love the eigth stanza and the very last line. Great writing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


The flow of this was perfect, it wasn't choppy, and it created an image in my head.
The key, as OwlGirl said, also really captivated me.
Keep this up!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow! I love this! Especially stanza 7, I have been searching for a good key-heart rhyme for a while now and you found it! Amazing! This is a beautiful poem and is well written with a nice flow and rhyme scheme. :D

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on June 13, 2012
Last Updated on June 13, 2012
Tags: pearl, death, darkness, love, key

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earthtohannah
earthtohannah

United Kingdom



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My name is Hannah, and I'm 16 years old. I live with music all the time, I literally would not survive without music I tend to write whatever comes into my head at the time, whether it's based o.. more..

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