With Words and Verses  (Sonnet 2)

With Words and Verses (Sonnet 2)

A Poem by dan nacario

With words an verses written in my page,
Were letters that speak to you in silence..
If my rhyme shall never die,fade nor age,
Then thou shall hear of words that my leaf brings,
That I've been trying to tell you for too long,
To such indifferent eyes and deaf soul,
In me thou hear the echoes of such song,
That in me he painted upon his fall,
Now that my lips had given you regret,
And proved that your sweet fairytale do lie,
Then sullen tale buried in my content,
Scream and spells this knight's last first kiss goodbye..
       Say farewell to my poetic letters,
       But you shall live with this haunting verse.

© 2012 dan nacario


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Oh such a nice write here with such a impact especially in that ending with those last lines. I really like this a lot. The words in each line you have chosen fit so well and make up such a nice write. Filled of a writers great words and nice rhyming and flow. I love these parts:
"With words an verses written in my page,
Were letters that speak to you in silence..
If my rhyme shall never die,fade nor age,"

"Scream and spells this knight's last first kiss goodbye..
Say farewell to my poetic letters,
But you shall live with this haunting verse."

Posted 9 Years Ago


My favorite parts are "that your sweet fairytale do lie" and knight's last first kiss goodbye". . it makes me remember the quotation that I believe which is nothing lasts forever. .By the way thank you for adding me as your friend ^_^. .

Posted 9 Years Ago


This has that lingering mystery that follows you as you follow the words, dark light shining. Great write

Posted 9 Years Ago


This poem seems to be very eluding....a mysterious type of prose.you can feel the haunting verse as been said to the last line of the sonnet. the author tries to emphasize the longings of something...loneliness has takes it place for this sonnet.approved.good composition....=))

Posted 9 Years Ago


Listen to the silent scream of a letter ...so dark and haunting...

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on October 23, 2011
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dan nacario
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iriga city, cam. sur, Philippines



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