Between the right and wrong

It is not that,
I am here with my own wish,
You can fantasize,
More innovatory,
Try to sniff it,
And elaborate that,
It is not one dimensional,
My eyes are pasted on my heart,
Two eyes, two heart,
A heart within the heart,
And my thoughts are,
No man's land.

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

I have read this one several times... thinking.. look at title, and read again.. the more I read the more I see and the more it makes me think.. what is the right?.. what is wrong?.. why no man's land?.. are you taunting the reader?.. or are you saddened by the status?.. sniffing out the inventory and inspecting the goods seems very cold and calculated and would surely keep those eyes open and protective... very thought-provoking.. As always such a joy to read your works..

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou so much :)

[M.A.Rathore]

Mystic. Yes. No one can reach to your thoughts and that you come here to pay regards for someone's wish...

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot sir :)

[M.A.Rathore]

Welcome always..

[Baby Ricochet]

"My eyes are past on my heart" Great line.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou Baby ricochet

[R Smith]

an exceptional poem, more great writing from you Hardeep :)

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot Richard, glad you liked it

[Emily]

'Two eyes, two heart'
I am not sure why, but I love this line if your poem!

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou Emily

[Rene Salinas]

There seems to be a contradiction in terms between your words yet how much of an even is when you stop your heart and mind and open your self the the other. Where have you gone? While you take the other person in? Is it no man's land or are you simply imbued by the presence of the other hum being.

Whichever way you want to look at it. This writing comes as an invitation to open up.

Thankyou

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou so much Rene

[Avinash]

Its being lost but still knowing where do you belong. It makes you think any relationship in multiple dimensions. Looking for identity. Its true that we can not connect with others unless we are connected to our true self.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou my dear friend

[ayesha gupta]

nicely penned. i liked reading it. i find your poems are not like read and get-over, it has long-lasting effects.
thanks for sharing. :)

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou Ayesha, much appreciated :)

[Luximir]

Very interesting! I liked the ending, though, well, a very deep and insightful ending! Thank you for sharing this :)

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou so much :)

[MomzillaNC]

Truth, understanding and compassion are all born in the middle from where we can see all sides.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou for a nice review :)

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome.

[Matching Socks]

The truth lies somewhere in between... Good job.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thanks a lot Ana.