Between the right and wrong

Between the right and wrong

A Poem by hardeep sabharwal

It is not that,
I am here with my own wish,
You can fantasize,
More innovatory,
Try to sniff it,
And elaborate that,
It is not one dimensional,
My eyes are pasted on my heart,
Two eyes, two heart,
A heart within the heart,
And my thoughts are,
No man's land.

© 2014 hardeep sabharwal


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I have read this one several times... thinking.. look at title, and read again.. the more I read the more I see and the more it makes me think.. what is the right?.. what is wrong?.. why no man's land?.. are you taunting the reader?.. or are you saddened by the status?.. sniffing out the inventory and inspecting the goods seems very cold and calculated and would surely keep those eyes open and protective... very thought-provoking.. As always such a joy to read your works..

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

hardeep sabharwal

9 Years Ago

Thankyou so much :)



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Beautifully written Hardeep with perfectness and its very moving I feel.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hardeep sabharwal

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Prabha
No man's land, I had forgotten about that place. Thanks for reminding us of it, in the world in which there is no battle ground just a land without conflict that belongs to no one

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hardeep sabharwal

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot :)
"Two eyes, two heart,
A heart within the heart,
And my thoughts are,
No man's land."

A well written and conveyed poem. Thank you for sharing...:).................

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hardeep sabharwal

9 Years Ago

Thankyou so much sir :)
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)..........

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patiala , punjab , India



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Hardeep Sabharwal describes himself as person of few words. He is one of millions of middle class Indians who do not have any ideology; they only want to live a peaceful life. The thing that hurts him.. more..

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