Broken Hearts

Love is pain,then so I stress, you're tearing my heart out.
Get a straw stick it in me and watch my love pour out.

 My emotional feelings quiver you're tearing my heart out.
Get a straw stick it in and watch my love pour out.

 I went from heaven to hell "for who you" you're tearing my heart out.
 Get a straw stick it in me and watch my love pour out.

 I'm feeling pain and sorrow as each day pass you're tearing my heart out.
  Get a straw stick it in me and watch my love pour out.

 I hate myself I want to die you're tearing my heart out.
 Get a straw stick it in me and watch my love pour out.

 I can't eat or sleep, why you do this to me you're tearing my heart out.
 Get a straw stick in me there's my love its pouring out.

 I'm having suicidal thoughts,I'm going crazy you tearing my heart out.
 Get a straw stick it in me and watch my love pour out.
 
Things are looking up right now, I'm not letting you tear my heart out.
So get a straw stick it in me and I bet no more love pours out.

Author's Note

Someone takes and takes and feel they're taken for granted and cheated till their once full heart of love pours out till completely empty

Reviews

[Frieda P]

I like it, but I'm really mad at that bi_atch right now. You've written a perfect account of what it feels like when someone drains the life out of you, 'stick a straw in it, I may just steal that line from you. Like how you punched the end, 'not lettin you tear my heart out.' Kudos, strong read.

[kelvin]

Oh thank you so much for the nice words and yes i try to express the different hurts or emotion a person did so wrong goes through thank you again

[C.C. Marx]

Ouch nothing is worse than someone taking your love, throwing it on the ground, and smashing it to pieces with no second thoughts. Great write

[kelvin]

i agree and thank you for your views

[C.C. Marx]

My pleasure :)

[Akira Kodama]

Quite sorrowful. Emotional cruelty can go every which way. Great write.

[kelvin]

Thank you for your thoughts here and yes i agree with you on that

[luviva]

ok.. you touched my heart in here.,...
these girls who tear boys' hearts out are so ruthless
and you addresed them good in here.
loved the determination at the end...
"........am not letting you tear my heart out"

[kelvin]

Well thank you so much for you thoughts on this read here and i agree women as well as men do tend to be cruel.

[Sami Khalil]

You write some unique writes dear poet and this is one of them ... I like the progression of thoughts and events until it hit us at the end where you have to allow that person to break your heart or you can also not allow them... Another way to look at it is that some people suck you dry , take advantage of your love then break it for their selfish desires... Another good write...

[kelvin]

I try to right about all or any situation the comes to mind not being one Exactly right you hit that right on. and thank you for stating there's a uniqueness to my writing i try to not always write one way but rather as many different ways or situations or scenes that come to mind thanks for your views

[Sami Khalil]

Smiling ....