Cloud Nine Crashing From This High

Cloud Nine Crashing From This High

A Poem by kelvin


I’m crashing from this high. As I fall from the sky I see angels basking on clouds,
pick-nicking, waving to me happily saying good bye, then so I crash from this high.

I see dragons that fly by in the sky yet they try to lend me a helping hand by throwing me a extra set of wings but they’re not in my grasp. Then so I crash , I crash from this high.

I’m not wide awake, but rather I’m half awake near a subconscious state, as I hear the sound of the wind  roaring against me instead of flowing with me as I take my free fall from cloud nine. So why does it fight and resist me instead of follow me? Then so I crash from this high.

I watch in amazement as fairies I thought didn’t exist come to light with not enough pixie dust to share to get me back on cloud nine. Then so I crash, I crash from this high.

I see the world’s whole geographic map laid out from trees, to bodies of water, land that’s developed and non-developed in sections. Even the people below look like small ants as I look down upon them from the sky like an eagle. Then so still I crash from this high.

Ah man you should see it from up here, I don’t want to loose this feeling up here in the sky, but yet still I crash from cloud nine and fall from the sky.

This cool animated world is starting to fog up and smear as the end of my date with cloud nine draws near. So I sit back and enjoy this ride as I fall from the sky and I crash, I crash from this high.


© 2013 kelvin


Author's Note

kelvin
This high being spoken about could be a high of anything from high on life, love, accomplishments, winning of and even drugs, for this is a read simply written from my mind of creative thinking nothing more or less enjoy tell me what you think.

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The perpectives change when we reach those summits of life or achievements . We tend to be like Eagles who are the kings of summits... We rise above triviality of human propblems and soar with the soul bound heaven... These heights are won through creativity and hard word with countless ours of sacrifice and trying. There are other artificial heights that we achieve from addictions of any sort but those are mirages in our minds that has no real value and which make us fall and crash to our demises.
Another of your good writes and wise ones...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kelvin

11 Years Ago

Well thank you fellow writer I appreciate it and your thoughts here are wise within their own right .. read more
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)



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ok.. lets hope it was an enjoyable fall!
great read!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kelvin

11 Years Ago

yeah lets hope thanks
This pushes me off into a world of day dreaming. You did a great job with discribing your feelings here I could totally relate and latch on to what you were portraying. Very great piece as always :) keep it up!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kelvin

11 Years Ago

Oh thank you very much for your thoughts here I really didn't know what to expect out of this one
Interesting imaginary you managed to write in this piece, love how you managed to bring everything into a "nirvana" state of mind, anyway great job...love your style

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kelvin

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much I appreciate your kind thoughts here.
The perpectives change when we reach those summits of life or achievements . We tend to be like Eagles who are the kings of summits... We rise above triviality of human propblems and soar with the soul bound heaven... These heights are won through creativity and hard word with countless ours of sacrifice and trying. There are other artificial heights that we achieve from addictions of any sort but those are mirages in our minds that has no real value and which make us fall and crash to our demises.
Another of your good writes and wise ones...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kelvin

11 Years Ago

Well thank you fellow writer I appreciate it and your thoughts here are wise within their own right .. read more
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
I like it. I can see you coming down, meeting angels, dragons, fairies and still crashing. It sounds to me like someone coming out of a particularly good dream.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kelvin

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much I'm glad you like it

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