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 5 Senses

5 Senses

A Poem by kelvin

 

As I inhale I take a deep breath and I smell the sweet smell of honey suckle that’s been baked from the warmth of the sun, which leaves the air having a nice pleasant sugary smell.

 

The warm sun reflects off the moisture on the flowers and trees looking as if they were diamonds dripping on the ground in the lovely windy breeze.

 

Birds of all breeds collaborate together to chirp and make song, while I listen to the wind chimes bang together from the breeze as the dew drops like tears off the gutters falling into a half empty pail to make tunes for the perfect bird song.

 

I stretch my arms and I yawn as the sun blows its warm breath and talks to the wind. I can feel it softly caress my skin like I had the finest masseuse massaging my body in a summer eve’s wind.

 

 

 I nod my head and I wave to say hi, as I take a sip of my favorite beverage from my favorite cup and watch the traffic goers wave back to me as they ride by, for I wonder what destination before them awaits.

© 2013 kelvin


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kelvin
Nice use of the senses tell me what you think.

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Featured Review

they imagery you conveyed in this poem is absolutely exquisite. love the fact that one sits back in enjoying their moment of being in a reverie while the world zooms by them. this poem sort of reminds me to "remember to stop and smell the flowers", kind of saying. great write, pen on :))

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kelvin

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much i really appreciate it and glad you think so.
ms. barrie

11 Years Ago

you are verily welcome, Kelvin :)



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This brings to mind summer evenings back in Georgia. Maybe it's the honeysuckle; we had a patch of it growing in our backyard. Thank you for sharing this and bringing back find memories.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kelvin

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much and I'm glad I was a able to bring back some memories for you I appreciate your.. read more
The simple things in life are the most pleasureable...

This was a charming read....

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kelvin

11 Years Ago

Yes I agree.Thank you very much for you kind thoughts here.
Yellow Butterfly

11 Years Ago

Your welcome...
You praise them all: sound, sight, touch, smell, taste. Very nice....

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kelvin

11 Years Ago

Well thank you very much i tried to tangle them in with the on comings of nature and the scene.
Nature appeases all senses and how... Your lovely poetry and awesome imagery tells it all.
Wonderful to read. Especially in a time when we just keep rushing and pushing our way through, thinking of what needs to be done next in our bloody daily grind.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kelvin

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your all to nice thoughts here i really appreciate it.
DIVYA

11 Years Ago

you are welcome!
they imagery you conveyed in this poem is absolutely exquisite. love the fact that one sits back in enjoying their moment of being in a reverie while the world zooms by them. this poem sort of reminds me to "remember to stop and smell the flowers", kind of saying. great write, pen on :))

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kelvin

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much i really appreciate it and glad you think so.
ms. barrie

11 Years Ago

you are verily welcome, Kelvin :)
I really enjoyed this write, such vivid imagery, good solid write

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kelvin

11 Years Ago

well thank you so much for your thoughts here.
Wow. This is your most descriptive poem I have read from you with a lot of pleasant moments with Mother nature and waking up to life daily.
"I stretch my arms and I yawn as the sun blows its warm breath and talks to the wind. I can feel it softly caress my skin like I had the finest masseuse massaging my body in a summer eve’s wind."
Those are my faves in this magical poem...Well done dear poet...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

It turned out good and enjoyable...:)
kelvin

11 Years Ago

I'm glad you think so
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

^^~^^ :)

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