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Scorned Woman

Scorned Woman

A Poem by kelvin

Nose running, head aching
She’s so mad her body’s shaking.
Her eyes so red, 
many tears she shed
She’s a volcanic eruption 
about to cause mad destruction
Her heart’s been broken now its hell to pay,
so take this notion
 
Her hearts been torn 
so prepare for hell’s fury she’s a woman scorned

© 2013 kelvin


Author's Note

kelvin
scorned, mad, angry,vengeful whatever it maybe but its all brewed from a angry or upset type emotion. what you think

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So many women are scorned by their abusive boyfriends or wicked husbands that it drives them to the edge of abyss. Some people say it is their fault , that they brought it upon themselves but I say leave them alone if you can't reason with them for it is hard to change others. We can change ourselves and be a good example. It takes two to tango so let us be respectful and compassionate towards them . We don't know what people are going through at any moment but we can be sympathetic.
A very good write dear poet.
For a minute it sounded like a sad song...:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kelvin

10 Years Ago

Thank you it always good to hear your most insightful thoughts here and you a*s right why fuel the f.. read more
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are right too dear poet...Have a great one...:)



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she sounds angry very good poem

Posted 5 Years Ago


kelvin

5 Years Ago

Yes she does I feel sorry for him. Thanks for your words
It is easy to get like that if your heart has been broken, but I have learned from my many broken hearts, it is not worth it to get mad. It wasn't meant to be. I like your writing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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kelvin

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your words and I totally agree
woah.... this was deep and beautiful.


loved it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Scorn I will take with me, with my stank-face and throwing shade, but touch me? It won't be a tornado - it'll come quiet in the night and you'll never see it coming. Good read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Hell hath no fury like that of a woman scorned. Kevin that is sooooooo true, I have been there. It is an awful rage I get like an F5 Tornado and am ready to bring the house down on someone's head. This is an awesome write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kelvin

10 Years Ago

Yeah I can't imagine going through it from a woman's prospective but I've seen the effects. thank yo.. read more
good for her, i hope she gets her revenge...whoever is the perpetrator probably deserves it.

nicely penned, Kelvin.

jacob

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kelvin

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much for you thoughts here.
Yup, she sounds angry lol.

Cool rhyme scheme on a subject matter I've seen first hand, um, a couple of times.




Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kelvin

10 Years Ago

Thank you and I know what you mean haha it can get ugly.
I wouldn't want to be on the recieving end of her scorned woes, I can tell yah, you have created a feeling of climatic suspence rather effectively me thinks, well done

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kelvin

10 Years Ago

Well I thank you kindly and I wouldn't want to be on the receiving end of her vengeance either
Some women erupt in fury; some encase themselves in ice. But a woman will get her revenge in the end.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kelvin

10 Years Ago

Thank you Miss Marie its always good to hear your thoughts on a read thank you again
So many women are scorned by their abusive boyfriends or wicked husbands that it drives them to the edge of abyss. Some people say it is their fault , that they brought it upon themselves but I say leave them alone if you can't reason with them for it is hard to change others. We can change ourselves and be a good example. It takes two to tango so let us be respectful and compassionate towards them . We don't know what people are going through at any moment but we can be sympathetic.
A very good write dear poet.
For a minute it sounded like a sad song...:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kelvin

10 Years Ago

Thank you it always good to hear your most insightful thoughts here and you a*s right why fuel the f.. read more
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are right too dear poet...Have a great one...:)

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