The Feeling

The Feeling

A Poem by Crystal Ellyson
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How a girl feels when hurts someone

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Her heart feels like it is breaking to pieces

She feels like she wants to scream and cry

But she knows she will weak if does those things

She knows she did what was best for him

She knows he will be hurt, and he might hate her

But she hates herself for doing it

Because she could never love anyone with her heart

So she just sits in her room alone and hopes one day she can change

She hopes her heart can change and make her love someone in the future

© 2014 Crystal Ellyson


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There are those believing themselves incapable of love only because they have never really come across it. But the sense of despair here is well presented and I enjoyed this one very much.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crystal Ellyson

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much!!!!!
Heart issues of a different kind. The story of this is well conveyed. The one thing though to work on is making sure all the words are there. But other than that, I like it and can relate to it well. Sometimes I wish my heart could be 'normal'.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crystal Ellyson

7 Years Ago

Thank you for the advise and the review. I should have re-read it before I posted it. I get to typin.. read more
Extant

7 Years Ago

I understand. I have the same tendency. You're very welcome.
This is really well done:) great work

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crystal Ellyson

7 Years Ago

Thank You for the review, I think it still needs a little bit of work.
A. Amos

7 Years Ago

Don't worry too much:)

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Crystal Ellyson
Crystal Ellyson

Vincent, AL



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I am 31 years old. I am an aunt to a nephew and two nieces. I enjoy writing anything that comes to my mind. I live in Alabama, USA. I hope to make some friends here. more..

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