Daddy

Daddy

A Poem by Crystal Ellyson
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A child view on what happens to the child and what the child becomes as an adult

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Daddy why didn't you hold my hand, when I ask you to
Why did you leave us
Did you not love us anymore
Was we not your pride and joy
Did you not care for us anymore
Why didn't you call or visit
Do you know what this done to me
I thought i did something bad and I wanted to fix it
You know it took me years to realize I didn't do anything wrong
You know what we did fine without you
Then you come to me years later and try to be the daddy you were suppose to be
I think you wanted me to tell you that I love you
But you didn't here it from me
I know I am suppose to honor my father
But I can't
I know I am suppose love my father 
But I can't
So daddy guess what I don't love or care for you one bit
And you know what you made me this way

© 2014 Crystal Ellyson


Author's Note

Crystal Ellyson
I know it is harsh, but it is my true feelings.

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yeah wow harsh ... but how to qualify what is inside?

each of us has our lessons I suppose, we all do try and do the best with what has been given to us, even if it does not always seem that way ... I wonder, what was daddy's parents like to make him so absent in the life that you mention. Life is funny how it conditions us and our rights and wrongs often vary ..

you wrote what is in your heart .. even though harsh you feelings do jump right out and tell us how you feel ...

LOVE, PEACE & HAPPINESS to you

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crystal Ellyson

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the review. I had to get it out, because I wanted to move on and be free of the pain that.. read more
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KWP

7 Years Ago

I am so happy to hear that you are finding your own peace ... we can waste so much of our lives livi.. read more



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That had to have been tough; but you captured the feeling of abandonment so well!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crystal Ellyson

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the review, it was tough. I got through it. In a way it made me a better person, but it a.. read more
Michael Stevens

7 Years Ago

I can imagine!
yeah wow harsh ... but how to qualify what is inside?

each of us has our lessons I suppose, we all do try and do the best with what has been given to us, even if it does not always seem that way ... I wonder, what was daddy's parents like to make him so absent in the life that you mention. Life is funny how it conditions us and our rights and wrongs often vary ..

you wrote what is in your heart .. even though harsh you feelings do jump right out and tell us how you feel ...

LOVE, PEACE & HAPPINESS to you

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crystal Ellyson

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the review. I had to get it out, because I wanted to move on and be free of the pain that.. read more
This comment has been deleted by the poster.
KWP

7 Years Ago

I am so happy to hear that you are finding your own peace ... we can waste so much of our lives livi.. read more

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Crystal Ellyson
Crystal Ellyson

Vincent, AL



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I am 31 years old. I am an aunt to a nephew and two nieces. I enjoy writing anything that comes to my mind. I live in Alabama, USA. I hope to make some friends here. more..

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