Our Melody

I honestly don't even know where these kind of poems are coming from!

Take my hand.

Close your eyes.

Breathe me in.

Just free your mind.

 

It’s only us.

Time does not exist.

There’s no need to rush.

Just enjoy this bliss.

 

Trace my lips,

As you hear me speak.

Can you hear the thumping,

Of my racing heartbeat?

 

Let your hand,

Graze my cheek.

As I listen intently,

To the words you speak.

 

Do you feel the air,

Brush by your skin?

Do I stir up something

Deep within?

 

Relax your muscles.

You’re safe with me.

Forget the world.

As we make our own melody. 

 

Reviews

[Carolann Dowsett]

Beautifully romantic, I love this

[Mir]

Thank you! :)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome :)

[Zachary_James]

I love this very much, this is wonderful this was a fantastic read.

[Mir]

Thank you for reviewing! :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[Jordan's Back]

a very romantic piece with a twist of longing, Wonderful!

[Mir]

Thank you1

[Miranda Richard]

This is so well written! Great use of imagery. A lovely poem.

[Mir]

Thank you so much! :D

[Astrid Wanye]

This is so good! Just beautiful! :)

[Mir]

Aw thank you! :)

[teardrop]

Very nicely written and well expressed.
a sweet wonderful write : )

[Mir]

Thank you! :)

[de_maruf]

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[Nithin Purple]

Good one

[Mir]

Thankyou!

[lee von cleef]

listing is soft,the horses are talking,rubbing their heads,scratching their tails,stomping their hoofs to a bunkhouse jam,smooth flow.

[Mir]

I'm sorry, but I don't understand your review..

[lee von cleef]

the form is smooth,the interaction is inviting, I like the poem until the end,"as we make our own melody" This line needs to finish stronger.

[Mir]

Oh haha, okay! Well thank you for your review!