Four Senses

I didn't think it was possible

to fall anymore.

But you proved me wrong

because I'm falling harder and harder

and my balance is becoming poor. 

My vision is selective.

Lately I'm only seeing you.

and those gorgeous brown eyes,

even though they're not blue,

Are deeper than the skies.

And something I can't help but look into. 

I might be going deaf.

I can't hear anything

but your voice.

Your word's are like a song

and I'm without a choice.

My body is numb.

Except for when you touch.

Your fingers are like magic,

sending tingles down my spine.

Leaving me to wonder

if I'm ever on your mind. 

My taste is still in tack,

because your lips I've yet to kiss. 

But taste buds still yearn for you

Like our lips have already mingled

and it's your taste they miss. 

You appeal to my four sense,

like nobody's done before.

And no matter how much

you irritate me,

my love is only growing more and more. 

<3 

Author's Note

I'm aware there are five sense. :) haha

Reviews

[B-poet]

Very well written and I liked how you intergrated all five senses within this profound poem. Great write. :)

[Jack...]

I enjoyed this.

[Trigorin]

Not bad, but check your spelling and grammar. There's a few little errors here and there. You've painted a nice picture with this, but it doesn't really feel like it's going anywhere. I think you could have done better by not going for the sort of generic devotional format that you've chosen and instead made some more interesting choice, but as it stands it's still a good start.