sTupiD s**T

sTupiD s**T

 

 

Why

do things

go down

like thay do

The worlds

full of

sTupiD s**T

 

sTupiD s**T

happens

all the time

just push past

and live on

dont let the

sTupiD s**T

get you down

say F**k it

and move on

 

Author's Note

so what do you think. does it relay real life semi kinda or what. be completly honest dont hold back. suggestions are greatly appritiated.

Reviews

[Stephen J. Vattimo]

Frogbean,

The first thing I suggest is you use a bolder test, when I was viewing your poem , I had a hard time seeing it on the screen. For the content, The message is true, I think people a lot of times try to medicate their problems away, instead facing the facts that this world is a hard place, and fairness rarely is found , people need to face pain, and figure out how to get through life's trials, not numbing themselves with substances and pretend the problems they face will go away by their self. I think you could improve you writing by introducing analogies in your poetic writings . A good writer's goal is not just to communicate their message, but to get the reader to also feel the emotions that inspired poet to write the piece

[Tony]

The use of capitals in error create an overall great look for this work. Thus it is artistic.
The poem is cool too. and correct.

[Seriana]

I like. It's good. I wish it were easy to get rid of that stupid s**t, ya know? Sigh....good read.

[jazz]

i like it...its blunt and honest and something short enough you could keep in your mind when "stupid s**t" is getting you down..ha ha

the only thing i wanna know is if there is a reason you capitalize some of the letters in stupid s**t

[*Kantola*]

It sort of relay's a real life situation, in a sense. Good job on this. Random question: in the poem are you saying 'dont do stupid s**t' or are you saying 'forget about the stupid s**t u do! it was fun while it lasted'?

[shadadakiya]

lol yeah s**t happens