edisius

 

 

 

edisius

 

only blood flows today

nomore tears are left

to many wasted

now wishing i be dead

hating life

hating you

hating me

only blood is shed

on this day

b/c i like red

 

Reviews

[ANNA]

Its real! You write what you feel at the time.. It was sad but beautiful in the since of short words but long meaning.. Great job

Anna

[lady o]

I like the simplicity of the piece... it says much with out being overly wordy, short sweet and to the point.

the O

[Akiabella]

The tone of this gives me the impression that the narrator is very young and naive. The poor grammar stands out more than the poem's message.

I like it... it's sad... but it's good to show you emotions.

[Katrinka Johnson]

This is a really sad but then again I like sad.