Suspended

Suspended

A Poem by hattrick1090

Sitting, waiting,watching
It's time
Rolling,Moving,Going
creeping...creeping...creeping...
It's cold
A dusting of snow
A white light blanket
Imprints of tires 
following their paths
Turning,Roaring,Spinning
An open concrete sea
Pulling, Faster, Rushing,
Someones hitting fast forward
Lifting,Rising,Flying
I'm floating up
higher,higHER,HIGHER
SMALLER, SMAller,smaller
Bright rays of gold
Bounce over a white billowy ocean
Vastness,Endless,Limitless
Ascending,Leveling,Stabilizing
peaceful,beautiful,sublime
suspended 

© 2010 hattrick1090


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This is really good.
I felt every adjective I felt as if I was suspended.
You are very good with writing about feeling.
Great Job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


somehow this poem makes me feel like I am looking down onto a canvas in a dream. Excellent.

Posted 10 Years Ago


It felt like a drive in Toronto, up a tower, then the lift stops.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on January 25, 2010
Last Updated on January 26, 2010

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