A Walk In the Rainbow

A Walk In the Rainbow

A Poem by hattrick1090

I'm going for a walk
A walk in the rainbow
Into rolling green hills
for miles and miles
where the sky is deep blue 
and the sun is bright yellow 
where the rays of the sun 
shine for miles and miles
The colors are warm
while the airs even warmer
with a path stretched in front
for miles and miles
Where does it go?
It's never mattered before
cause adventure Iv'e got
 for miles and miles
I'll end up somewhere 
but there's a journey to enjoy 
Just living in the moment 
for miles and miles
Oh I'm walking in the rainbow
for miles and miles

© 2010 hattrick1090


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What a wonderful idea! I just love rainbows, their come and go, their shimmering bright, their twins .. to go for a walk, to explore one would be magic.

Your poem seems to thrill in your long walk .. you know you could bathe in each colour .. and then, have such colourful memories. Love it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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imagery often are hidden, walking on a rainbow seems, humanity walking in life towards future that we are filled with barriers, feel emotions that are truly our own as we are born this way, but we are responsible for what to feel. that is the beauty of humanity.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is a wonderful write, I found this ever so beautiful. Rainbows are just so magical to look at. Well written!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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..So magical here, this is ever so lovely. I love rainbows..

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a wonderful idea! I just love rainbows, their come and go, their shimmering bright, their twins .. to go for a walk, to explore one would be magic.

Your poem seems to thrill in your long walk .. you know you could bathe in each colour .. and then, have such colourful memories. Love it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked the idea of going for a walk in the rainbow. Free-flowing piece....just watch the spelling on the last line......but good

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

From the expression of colors to the repeating line this piece really captures the endless possibilities that await you when you move forward in the world with your eyes open.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 25, 2010
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