I Hate You More Than Painting

I Hate You More Than Painting

A Poem by Solitude
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This was the same English assignment, only I got extra credit for this one. :)

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I hate you more than painting
A color on a wall,
For every time I need more paint,
You never heed my call.



I hate you more than drawing
A bird that takes to flight,
For every time it turns out well,
You always pick a fight.



I hate you more than working
On what to draw or paint,
For our bond used to be darker,
But now it's growing faint.

© 2010 Solitude


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Solitude
I didn't write this for anyone, but tell me what you think anyway.

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I like your poem a lot. My only suggestion would be to correct the punctuation or don't use any. It should read like this:

I hate you more than painting
A color on a wall,
For every time I need more paint,
You never heed my call.

I hate you more than drawing
A bird that takes to flight,
For every time it turns out well,
You always pick a fight.

I hate you more than working
On what to draw or paint,
For our bond used to be darker,
But now it's growing faint.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I think it's cute. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Makes me want to paint and I don't usually paint as I have a interest in art I love to draw.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like your poem a lot. My only suggestion would be to correct the punctuation or don't use any. It should read like this:

I hate you more than painting
A color on a wall,
For every time I need more paint,
You never heed my call.

I hate you more than drawing
A bird that takes to flight,
For every time it turns out well,
You always pick a fight.

I hate you more than working
On what to draw or paint,
For our bond used to be darker,
But now it's growing faint.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nicely written. Very creative. It has a good flow and some really good emotions in it. Nice work!

-Howl

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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