loosing you, I lost myself

loosing you, I lost myself

you held my hand when others couldn't, 

love me even when we knew you shouldn't, 

and now your gone to the big city,

swallowed away by ambition and drive,

now days are endless,

Monday's soon forgotten,

What's the point, without you things seem rotten,

I've lost you and I cant believe, 

that you would go ahead and leave,

now as you leave you take,

a piece of me by mistake.

Reviews

[Little angel]

wow, this is beautiful..

[hayley-martin]

you seriously do not want to know what triggered this, and i think i might millie :) xx

[Millie]

Awww this has got true emotion and dept behind this
I'd love to find out what triggered this. . .
I this is my fav poem you could turn this into a story possibly ?.xx

[Peter Joseph Swanson]

Powerful! Marvelously done!