Dreams (WAY BETTER THEN ORIGINAL!!)

Dancing Cats,

partying rats?!

Uh-Oh

what a CATastrophe!

Dreams of Chocolate shakes,

how about candy cakes?

Maybe a dash of mix tapes

and crazy crepes!

Digging fossils,

lets go to Aeropostale!

Lets make some pasta!

We can see pengiuns in Antartica!

 

Eavesdropping people's Desktops

I would rather not learn about cash crops

chill with anyone

party and have fun!

Dreams galore,

nighttime isn't a bore anymore!

Don't dread that time of night

for dreaming is a wonderful flight!

Author's Note

Pun intended on CATastrophe ;) Please review!

Reviews

[Chloe]

Potato

[Nick Arouet]

Very funny poem! I was really entertained by it, personally. The rhymes are clever, but silly, and I hope that was your intention! The only issue I would possibly see is if you were attempting to make a kind of pattern. Because you did break the pattern of syllables and rhymes in some parts of the poem. If you weren't following a strict guideline of rhyme and syllable, then my critique is void and null! Lol. But I smiled during this particular poem, I thought it was really nice to read. Good work on it!

[haymaker14]

Thanks! I was not following a strict scheme, but I was attempting to as much as possible. But thanks a lot for pointing it out! I am Very happy you enjoyed it, and yes that was on purpose :) Thanks For Your Review!