Taking a Breath

Taking a Breath

A Poem by haymaker14

Random Poem XD. I have not been on here for a while so I know I am very rusty XD

I breathe,
and I stop.
My eyes
move towards the light

I am stuck,
as I lie down looking up.
My blonde hair
flows across my face as I rise.

I didn't know what to do,
I just stared.
I didn't think,
I didn't feel.

I was emotionless,
and I heaved a sigh
I saw a pair of eyes
frown upon me from the top of the hole

The dark figure smiled,
and suddenly I was pulled back up.
I was no longer

© 2013 haymaker14

Author's Note

I haven't been on here for a LOOOONNNGGGG time so I am very rusty. I know it kinda sucks. It's supposed to be talking about how friends and family can help you through hard times.

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Added on September 22, 2013
Last Updated on September 22, 2013



I am a female who ADORES reading and writing! I love writing poems! I love limericks but I don't write them much. I hope you enjoy my writing and my perspective on the world. I LOVE reviews, if it's b.. more..