A Chapter by J. Viands

It’s hard to see anything,

When you’re not looking,

I’m not looking,

So I see nothing.


So much for observation,

When you’re not observing,

Rather creating,

What could this be based on?


Maybe quickening,

A beckoning,

To see everything,



My realization,

That I am observing

What I am seeing.

Are piece’s falling in to position?


Still I don’t think I am succeeding.

Not yet am I returning,

To a skill I am recalling.

It seems I am still struggling.    

© 2012 J. Viands

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Sometimes we think we are seeing, but it can be subjective in some circumstances. And then, there is the blind, leading the blind!

Posted 8 Years Ago

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8 Years Ago

Good analyses might start using that when people ask me what it’s about thanks

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J. Viands

Leesburg, VA

My writing is refined in to portfolios I write to much to be able to post all my poetry separately don’t feel obligated to read the whole thing just what you would like… or the whole thi.. more..

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